Sophron


December 3, 2008, 10:39 am
Filed under: random

gosh, CM, i can’t write in proper english sentence again. It’s like back to square one, to my secondary school years. i’m having such a hard time doing RL because i can’t form complete and sound-correct sentences. and i’m stuck in this sentence now

“Similarly, authorities have to improve their monitor and protection of the country.”

?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!! right. But i don’t know how to change it. like you can’t say

” similarly, the monitoring and protecting of the country by the authorities have to be improved”
dieeeeeeeeeee

Anyway, donnie yen’s new movie is out. Anyone wanna watch with me?:D

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“Similarly, authorities have to improve on their monitoring and protection of the country.”

Would that help?

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